Week 4.

Carrying on from my first designs I have developed them. I feel I had I good illustration to start with and all I need to do was fine tune it.
I wanted to add a bit of colour to make it strong and engage the audience. I struggled with the charter illustration as the first boat was just getting lost amongst all the other imaginary, I still haven't decided which one I prefer but I feel they are both better than the last one, changing the silhouette of the boat and adding people fishing from it.

After talking to the tutors they recommended trying sunrises/sunsets instead of the coloured circles. I feel this my be to much but will try it. Now I need to start think about the layout of the brochure and the front cover.